About Me

Hi my name is Ava I am a year eight at ngatea primary school.
My teacher is Miss Williams and my class is the incredible minds. I like hockey and athletics, my favourite colour is blue. Have a look around my blog , I hope you like it.


Tuesday 3 November 2015

I woke up in a bright white room I sat up and looked around there was nothing but a door and the stretcher I was lying on I tried to get out of the bed but I was to numb and I just crumbled to the ground so I used the bed to help me up . I shuffled along the edge of the bed to the door and I tried to open it but it was locked I looked around for another way out and I saw a small camera up near the ceiling so I shuffled over to it to have a look at it but then I hear the door being unlocked so I spun around and I saw two big men in black suits and one smaller man wedged in between ( who was obviously the important one ) , he wore a navy blue suit and had a red tie , he had dark skin and very short black hair . “ I see you’re awake” he said , he had a deep voice and looked a little scary .
“ Wh-wh-who are y-you” I said a little frightened.
The man's face softened , “You don’t need to worry , we won’t hurt you”.
“ I said, who are are you” I repeated a little more stronger .
“ Listen kid , come with me I have to explain who we are and where we are but first let’s go 
somewhere else"

3 comments:

  1. Wow, all your writing is so descriptive. I actually really like these kind of stories, you've got me hooked.

    ReplyDelete
  2. Great storie to keep people on there toes the whole time.

    ReplyDelete
  3. Great storie to keep people on there toes the whole time.

    ReplyDelete