About Me

Hi my name is Ava I am a year eight at ngatea primary school.
My teacher is Miss Williams and my class is the incredible minds. I like hockey and athletics, my favourite colour is blue. Have a look around my blog , I hope you like it.


Sunday, 14 August 2016

My Poem

Swimming in the winter

The sky is grey as I step onto the sand.
I am wrapped in a warm towel that I don’t want to take off.
I dip the tip of my toe into the freezing water, It sends calm ripples out to sea.
My towel drops and I step deeper into the cold blue ocean .
Goose bumps appear on my skin as I keep on wading through the water.
The waves are small and they are all a deep blue colour.
I see a small wave building up in front of me and I decide to dive.
The coldness of the water surges through my body as I bring my head up and out.
I go deeper diving under the waves till there are no waves and I am floating in the ocean,
I am growing colder as I slowly swim back to the sand.
The warmth of my towel is calling me as I ride the waves ashore.
My lips are blue and I am shivering as the dry sand greets me.
I am finally wrapped up in my towel , warm again .

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